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the long intro idea can be good or bad, sumtimes its 2 long n the pay out after the intro isnt enough to be attached to a long intro, in ur case, the long intro made it 1000x better becuz the pay out( sorry i cant think of terms 2 use) afterwords was more then enough to make this piece a masterpiece. the long intro splits the song into 2 parts, and each part has to react and has to balance on each other 2 be a perfect song, and u did that amazingly. good job 13/10 n 7/5